Story Time

So I've decided to take my most recent roleplaying character, a girl named Anava, and develop a story for her.

I was actually inspired by my friend telling me about her day yesterday. She had Goth'd herself out with black lipstick and thick liner and was going to see Hamlet on a bus.

So I wrote this on the bus this morning. Note that this is a VERY rough draft and I didn't get very far at all.

One girl on the Greyhound bus caught more attention than others today. She wasn't loud; in fact, she was probably the quietest on the bus. She wasn't the prettiest girl, nor the ugliest.

Her black hair was short, soft, and thick. It came down almost to her shoulders but hung just above them. Her stare startled people, as her eyes a deep, striking shade of blue, shot through with sparks and spots of a lighter, silvery-blue.

But it wasn't these features that drew your focus.

It was her rich, dark black lipstick and thickly kohled liner, standing out starkly against her petal-white skin.

That's it. I didn't get any further with it, but I'll update with another blog entry once I type up more and edit everything. I think I'll make the beginning different. I'm definitely NOT satisfied with the way I began it. It doesn't catch enough attention and it sort of sounds like a sixth grader is writing it.

I'm not sure if this story will be erotic or not, but I'll add some little facts about Anava.

• Her name: Anava Sand
• Can control elements due to a power crystal shard lodged in her brain from a childhood accident
• Can turn into a black cat with emerald green eyes
• Usually wears leather and is CONSTANTLY carrying hidden weapons, usually throwing stars or knives

I might add some more facts about another character I have, Neyma. She's a totally SMEXY succubus that I actually drew, as well.

All for now. :D